1、【高分范文】
Mr．Smith，
    Congratulations for your 1Oth wedding anniversary! Thanks for inviting me to your 1Oth wedding anniversary．I’d like to go to your party at Park Hotel．but I have to go to Beijing for business on that day so I’m afraid I couldn’t attend your party．I hope that won’t bother you．I will bring a present for you from Beijing．And my wife and I will visit you after my coming back．Wish you have a good time．And congratulations again!
Have a goodtime!
                                                                         Yours respectively，
                                                                         Wang Lin
【写作点金】
    本文是一封取消预约的信函.因为本来是说好去参加别人结婚10周年纪念，即使去不了我们也应该向对方表示祝贺.然后再说自己为什么不能去参加聚会，并表示歉意.
    在写作时要注意语气一定要诚恳.在信的结尾要向对方再次表示祝贺，这样才显得有礼貌.

2、【高分范文】
    Almost every family in cities drink pure water nowadays．It has become a fashion．Why do people drink pure water instead of common water? The main reason is that pure water is good for Our health．Besides，drinking pure water is more convenient，because pure water can be drunk directly．
    Some people would ask why drinking pure water is good for our health．As we know，water pollution is very serious now．So drinking common water doesn’t sound so safe as before．Pure water is absolutely clean because it doesn’t contain any mineral element．Also some certain mineral in water will do harm to our bodies when it is taken too much．At this point，pure water should he our choice．
    Besides all above．pure water also tastes good．You should have a try if you haven’t ever drunk pure water before．

【写作点金】
在写这篇作文的时候，首先可以以很多人都喝纯净水来引出主题.这篇文章的重点是纯净水对身体有好处.我们可以就所了解的知识分条来阐述.因为这是一篇介绍性文章，所以在语言方面要平实.

3. 【高分范围】
Dear Mr. Meed
I read the job advertisement of your company in a newspaper. And I think the job suits me very much. Now I' d like to introduce myself to you.
My name is Wang Lin. I' m 24. I was awarded B.A. degree as an English major student in Beijing Foreign Studies University in 2002Dur-ing my college time, my marks range among top 5 of my peers in my school. After graduating from college, I worked as an interpreter in a trade company for three years. My boss gave me very high remarks about my work. And my easy-going personality made me build a broad network with  my colleagues and customers. I think three years is enough to do the same work, and I want to try something new. So I write to apply for the position offered by your company. Hope I can hear from you soon. Thanks for paying attention. Wish everything goes 6n well.
                                          Yours sincerely,
                                                                            Wang Lin

【写作点金】
求职信是一种比较正式的文体. 在申请中要写清楚自己的概况，并阐述自己有哪些条件符合该职位的要求. 在表述中要让对方感觉你已经很认真的看过他们公司的职位描述和要求. 如果职位要求里没有对工作经验作出要求，我们在写申请的时候也要申明自己有相关的工作经验，因为用人单位都很注重应聘者的工作经验. 求职申请开头的称呼和最后的署名一定要写.

4、【高文范文】
Life Is Precious
From the c picture below, we can a man Js crossing the street in a hurry. And he is not walking on the pavement, instead, he is running in  front of cars which are moving on the street. And to avoid hitting him, the  car makes a sudden stop. The following car hits that car on its back. Thus an accident is caused.
The man who is crossing the street doesn' t take life seriously, both  his and others. Running across a street is very dangerous because the run-ning person can be easily hurt by cars. And if the car which is about to hit the person makes a sudden break, there may be a car accident, just the picture, thus the people in the cars might be hurt.
Life is precious, and also vulnerable. We should not put ourselves  in  danger by any improper behavior.
【写作点金】
这篇看图作文是一篇警示性的图画文章. 第一步是向读者描述这张图片说的是什么事情. 第二步是自己的评论. 警示性的文章在评论中要向读者阐明图片中所示的危险性. 最后在文章结尾可以加入号召性的话语.

5、【高分范文】
Dear Sally,
     I'm sorry to tell you I have to cancel the appointment with you. My friend just told me she was coming to see mc tomorrow. She will arrive at 4:45 p.m. tomorrow, so I have to go to the station to pick her up. I really feel sorry about it. Can we make it another day? I will be free on Saturday, maybe we can meet on Saturday at 10:O0 a. m.. If it is also good for you please let me know.
     Sorry again for canceling the appointment. Hope everything goes on well with you.
                                                               Yours sincerely,
                                                                  Wang Lin
【写作点金】
    在写信取消预约的时候，一定要把自己为什么要取消预约的原因说清楚，不然会造成误会.除此之外还要表达你的遗憾和对对方的愧疚，如必要还要写上你将对此做什么补偿.在语气方面注意要诚恳.

6、【高分范文】
     The two pictures described one boy' s two different attitudes towards going to school. In the picture on the left, the boy ran into the school happily yelling that "I am already a pupil". He was so proud as well as excited to go to school that even his grandpa who was sending him to school looked pleased. On the contrary, as described in the picture on the fight, the boy was very upset when he finished school. And he said "To be a pupil is just to do homework" sadly. Even his grandpa looked depressed.
     There must be many such children who arc excited to go to school at first but disappointed by the fact that schooling is so boring that the only thing they have to do is the homework.
     This situation must be changed. Otherwise, going to school will always be a suffering to the children.
【写作点金】
    这篇看图作文旨在要学生将两幅图进行对比.我们不难看出两幅图里人物的态度截然不同，所以我们除了描述图片之外还要对造成这种不同的原因做合理分析.在文章最后可以就自己分析的原因提出倡议.